A small thing but the texture on the leather couch came out beautifully to my mind. Overall, I think the strongest thing I’ve achieved in coloring is how folds tend to come out in clothing. In terms of characterization, I watched the Red Letter Media criticism of the Star Wars sequels which posed an interesting question. “Can you describe a Star Wars character without saying what they look like, what kind of costume they wore, or what their profession or role in the movie was.”

That was profound to me. It meant you had to have clear personalities and motivations. While this story and the characters are young in development, I hope you’re forming answers in the back of your mind to these questions. I promise to keep trying to demonstrate character and deepen each of our protagonists as the story goes on.